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Yep, that's what she's doing, using their formal names, which nobody ever calls them, for their POV chapters and their nicknames for their non-POV chapters. That’s not only completely unnecessary and annoying, but it makes the POV character feel distant and a little closed off, which neither of these characters actually are. That’s the opposite of what you want to accomplish when you go into a character's head.
— Oct 01, 2018 05:38AM
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Linda ~ they got the mustard out! ~
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No Rey, you are not a drama queen.
You are a drama llama.
— Oct 03, 2018 10:53PM
You are a drama llama.
Linda ~ they got the mustard out! ~
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I doubt he's actually looking for a mandolin in the kitchen cupboard, but I can't for the life of me figure out what word should be there instead.
— Oct 03, 2018 09:30PM
Linda ~ they got the mustard out! ~
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"He was what Samuel’s mother would have called a “talk drink of water,” because he was all arms and legs and thin torso."
That's a "tall drink of water." At least he doesn't have a familiar gate. Though I'm not sure a talking drink of water is much better. ;)
— Oct 03, 2018 10:02AM
That's a "tall drink of water." At least he doesn't have a familiar gate. Though I'm not sure a talking drink of water is much better. ;)
Linda ~ they got the mustard out! ~
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Two pages-long sex scenes in the first three chapters. *skip*skip*skip*
I hope this doesn't continue like this.
— Sep 30, 2018 07:43PM
I hope this doesn't continue like this.
