Linda ~ they got the mustard out! ~’s Reviews > Acts of Faith > Status Update

No Rey, you are not a drama queen.

You are a drama llama.

I doubt he's actually looking for a mandolin in the kitchen cupboard, but I can't for the life of me figure out what word should be there instead.

"He was what Samuel’s mother would have called a “talk drink of water,” because he was all arms and legs and thin torso."

That's a "tall drink of water." At least he doesn't have a familiar gate. Though I'm not sure a talking drink of water is much better. ;)

Yep, that's what she's doing, using their formal names, which nobody ever calls them, for their POV chapters and their nicknames for their non-POV chapters. That’s not only completely unnecessary and annoying, but it makes the POV character feel distant and a little closed off, which neither of these characters actually are. That’s the opposite of what you want to accomplish when you go into a character's head.