Scarllet ✦ iamlitandwit’s Reviews > Jane, Unlimited > Status Update

*the only thing that bugs me is the fact that 'she says, says jane, says says says' is written every time someone says something. it's a little repetitive to me. there are other ways to state someone is talking.

other than that small hiccup, i'm sort of feeling like this is a choose your own story but the mc (jane) is the one making the choices which is so cool to me! i really just like jane. like a lot, & ivy too!!