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[Name Redacted] is 45% done
Yeah, the problem here is that I just don't care about anyone's story except for "Rob's". Not the circus, not the bloggers, etc. Le sigh.
Oct 14, 2017 11:00PM
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[Name Redacted]
[Name Redacted] is 89% done
Yeah...the urban-fantasy and the cosmic-horror elements just aren't meshing as well as the author wants them to. They could -- they CAN -- but he doesn't know how to do it here.
Oct 15, 2017 02:53AM
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[Name Redacted]
[Name Redacted] is 61% done
Uh...huh. So Gozer the Gozerian exists. And gods from Tolkien's work? This book is losing me rapidly... That sort of metafictional flourish works better if it's actually relevant to the plot or introduced earlier on. But it's not, and it wasn't. :(
Oct 15, 2017 01:17AM
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[Name Redacted]
[Name Redacted] is 61% done
So...it's getting a sort of "American Gods" + "Amber" feel.
Oct 15, 2017 01:10AM
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[Name Redacted]
[Name Redacted] is 40% done
It's never a good sign when I find myself spacing out and missing whole chapters because I'm just reading the words out of a sense of obligation.
Oct 14, 2017 10:40PM
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[Name Redacted]
[Name Redacted] is 11% done
That was a LONG intro... Entertaining, but it's nice to finally be at the first real chapter of the actual narrative.
Oct 14, 2017 06:43PM
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