Cel’s Reviews > A Wizard's Forge > Status Update
Cel
is 21% done
So much telling, not enough showing. 20% in and I feel nothing for any of the characters, which is saying something considering what's happened to our MC. I like the different cultures, but at the same time feel like I don't know much about them. Unimpressed so far.
— Aug 16, 2017 10:29AM
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Cel
is 52% done
I like the portrayal of Vic in the military, but I HATE THESE TIME JUMPS like what they hell, they're spaced out at such random times
— Aug 17, 2017 07:02AM
