Carmen’s Reviews > Loyalty and the Bed You Lie In > Status Update

I am convinced that this book was not proofread before it was released...even with almost three-fourths of the book completed I am still trying to figure out the purpose of the book. The storyline is not well developed. I honestly do not know how anyone rated this book five stars.

I'm really trying with this one. There are a lot of grammatical errors and the story line is lacking. I'm halfway done with the book and it's still all over the place.

The story is all over the place...

I haven't figured out exactly who or what the story is going to be about yet. Story is full of information that is not relevant. I'm hoping that it will end up being a good read.