Carmen’s Reviews > Loyalty and the Bed You Lie In > Status Update
Carmen
is 15% done
I haven't figured out exactly who or what the story is going to be about yet. Story is full of information that is not relevant. I'm hoping that it will end up being a good read.
— Apr 26, 2012 07:04AM
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Carmen
is 72% done
I am convinced that this book was not proofread before it was released...even with almost three-fourths of the book completed I am still trying to figure out the purpose of the book. The storyline is not well developed. I honestly do not know how anyone rated this book five stars.
— May 08, 2012 06:50AM
Carmen
is 52% done
I'm really trying with this one. There are a lot of grammatical errors and the story line is lacking. I'm halfway done with the book and it's still all over the place.
— May 07, 2012 07:21AM
