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Life's too short. The grammar errors, wrong tenses and missing words bad enough but ..... The time doesn't flow correctly... he sits down with a six pack opens one, they start talking and a very few sentences later he's tipsy and the beer is gone. SMH ....DNF

This needs a good editing. Yes I am a grammar nazi. I like sentences to be in their proper order. This should be "was still" not "still was". SMH.... I'm beginning to think this was another waste of time and money.