Status Updates From Simple Things

So far I can't put it down, loving the 2 mc, want to finish it to see what happens but don't want it to end.

Life's too short. The grammar errors, wrong tenses and missing words bad enough but ..... The time doesn't flow correctly... he sits down with a six pack opens one, they start talking and a very few sentences later he's tipsy and the beer is gone. SMH ....DNF

This needs a good editing. Yes I am a grammar nazi. I like sentences to be in their proper order. This should be "was still" not "still was". SMH.... I'm beginning to think this was another waste of time and money.

*sigh* jeez, I hate seeing MCs hooking up with other people. SMH...

There's a line in this story where it just says, "[discuss accident]." Self-editing at it's finest. *head desk*

I thought this character was meant to be sober; why is he drinking beer with dinner?