Cerise Montague’s Reviews > The Oddling Prince > Status Update
Cerise Montague
is 43% done
I love how the book built up to the protagonist’s journey for acceptance, only for him to go running straight home again and erase multiple chapters worth of some of the only development this book has truly had
— Sep 30, 2026 02:47PM
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Cerise Montague
is 66% done
This story loves to say the same thing over and over again, rendering the attempts at a story between each “if albaric goes, I go with him” moment completely fruitless
— 15 hours, 1 min ago
Cerise Montague
is 46% done
“I know because I know you.”
Can people just write in 3rd person omniscient?
— Oct 03, 2026 11:17AM
Can people just write in 3rd person omniscient?
Cerise Montague
is 21% done
The plot here is hard to parse? There’s a clear overarching emotional conflict but each chapter is otherwise just a new adventure between Aric and the elusive Albaric. It’s not the epic fantasy the praise and description promises.
— Sep 27, 2026 05:58AM
Cerise Montague
is 4% done
Hey why does the first person narration stutter so often? Like Aric speaks confidently in dialogue but his internal narration stutters a lot???
— Sep 25, 2026 05:49AM