Chelsea’s Reviews > Brisingr > Status Update
Chelsea
is 91% done
You could easily cut probably 30 pages of this book in just unnecessary words, and maybe another 30-50 pages in unnecessarily wordy exposition. There is so much Extra Stuff in this book that gets in the way of the story.
— May 16, 2017 01:27PM
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Chelsea’s Previous Updates
Chelsea
is 81% done
"Oromis smiled, his longish teeth glossy as enameled porcelain." Who the HELL was the editor who thought that sentence was fine.
— May 16, 2017 08:45AM
Chelsea
is 36% done
WAIT Helen definitely did not go with Jeod. I remember it vividly and now he says she left with him.
— May 05, 2017 01:22PM
