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Man I like the story but the storytelling could be better & it also needs serious editing. Also, at times it is unclear where we are??? I am reading it and think they’re in the castle and suddenly theyre at a café? Like the transitions could be more clear and smoother. I also think Noah is a bit annoying but Louis makes up for it 100%.
— Jul 22, 2026 02:04AM
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So many inconsistencies: in the beginning of the book it said Melody was 7 years old when Noah left & now he’s saying she was 5????
— Jul 22, 2026 02:41AM