Status Updates From Crown of Thorns

OKAY THE STORYTELLING IS SO FUCKING BAD

So many inconsistencies: in the beginning of the book it said Melody was 7 years old when Noah left & now he’s saying she was 5????

Man I like the story but the storytelling could be better & it also needs serious editing. Also, at times it is unclear where we are??? I am reading it and think they’re in the castle and suddenly theyre at a café? Like the transitions could be more clear and smoother. I also think Noah is a bit annoying but Louis makes up for it 100%.

I'll never tell him, but I think he saved my life. Not once. Every day. With every smile, every challenge, every reckless gesture of love.