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Ms. Valente is ruled by the fear of not having at least 2 metaphors or similes per 2-3 sentences, no matter how nonsensical or overwrought they are. Perhaps it is the cosmic rule of writing lay down by the Mare that gave her the power of story telling, [insert simile here, probably involving the moon, the color silver, or some liquid flowing. Perhaps all three]
— Apr 23, 2017 06:46PM
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