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The writing is so strange. I don't like it. No description whatsoever. Feelings? Nope. The writer is telling the emotion, not showing it, and I DON'T LIKE THAT. For example. The girl is mad, and out of nowhere, she just stabs someone... BUT we don't see her getting mad to the point she has to act. She just said... Yes, I'm mad.
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