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The writing is so strange. I don't like it. No description whatsoever. Feelings? Nope. The writer is telling the emotion, not showing it, and I DON'T LIKE THAT. For example. The girl is mad, and out of nowhere, she just stabs someone... BUT we don't see her getting mad to the point she has to act. She just said... Yes, I'm mad.

That half-orc has a thing for breasts. It's very annoying sometimes. And why not use the correct words? It's a NIPPLE!

During the spicy scene, I never know if he's behind or in front of her. The writing is so weird.

Listening the dramatized adaptation audiobook. It is so fun! I like it for now and the audio makes it so good I do not want to stop!