Sara’s Reviews > Alchemised > Status Update

Ferron and Helena are getting on my nerves with how violently back and forth their “emotional” attachment/moments are… I understand the characters are relatively young… but it’s giving emotional/psychological abuse and I don’t like it. Trying to hold out and finish the book.

“I’m sure there’s something poetic in it all, but right now all I feel is a new set of manacles.
So forgive me if I dislike looking at you. I’m still adjusting to the ways these new ones chafe.”
- Ferron

It amazes me how often Ferron acts like an angry kicked dog towards Helena most of the time, with brief glimpses of kindness/interest. Because most of the time he’s a complete @ss to her. 😒

"I've tried everything, Soren. I try to believe, but it's never enough. Even if I did really believe —if my soul's the price of saving you, of saving everyone"—she choked—"that's not a price. That's a bargain.”

This got me 😫

Okay… more starts to make sense in part 2

“Oh Marino, If I'd known what pain you'd cause me, I never would have taken you.
…
But at this point I suppose I deserve to burn. I wonder if you’ll burn too.”

😮‍💨