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Avah
is on page 150 of 203
it’s annoying when a character in a book tries to do research and they’re just really bad at it.. like obviously you didn’t find any results you can barely string a query together
— Jun 12, 2026 05:38PM
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Avah
is on page 172 of 203
what sort of dumbass keeps the door to their abattoir unlocked
— Jun 12, 2026 05:53PM
Avah
is on page 77 of 203
the name drops in this book have all been pretty uninspired and unimmersive but there was just a random fucking ricky montgomery mention… please have some class!
— Jun 12, 2026 12:26PM
Avah
is on page 14 of 203
if you write your book in present tense you should have a pretty good reason for it…. it doesn’t feel like there is a reason in this book’s case 😬
— Jun 12, 2026 10:25AM
