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Kayla
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The third act conflict feels so contrived and just highlights how ungrounded the romantic pairing is. Also I don't mind the male love interest being a single father, but I certainly could do without so much of the kid being included in this story.
— Jun 11, 2026 06:20PM
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Kayla
is on page 295 of 484
This is starting to feel like a slog. I can't put my finger on why, but it suddenly feels a bit tedious. Maybe it's the teenager I'm being forced to read about?
— Jun 10, 2026 11:41AM
