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The writing is slightly better, mostly using the active voice, although still sometimes dipping into the passive voice but now seeming more intentional.
— Jun 09, 2026 09:23AM
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Max Mills
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I had high hopes for this, and have felt frustrated or let down, so far at least, by the writing style. It's written in a passive voice giving the feeling of being out of time. This might be argued to be justified for a myth, but also there is no presence. I hope it gets better...
— Jun 08, 2026 11:57AM
