Lit Reader’s Reviews > The Husbands of Elizabeth Bennet, Volume One: A Pride and Prejudice Variation > Status Update

In the midst of a very awkward flirtation with a stranded Marquess, WHY is Eliezabeth finding time to corner Darcy in order to talk to him about Wickham of all people??? The rogue could have been so easily edited out, why insisting on keeping him in the story ??

I never understood the need to go back to the original P&P to address every point and tie every “loose ends”, when the author here has made the effort to imagine al alternate story, with different plot points, characters, roadmap, and ending !

Just WHY !?

Why is Lizzy talking about Darcy making Bingley abandon Jane while atrending the Mystery Marquess’ sickbed, while he has a fever & infected stab wounds ???

Just starting this. I had high hopes for this one because the intro says the author wrote this as a fanfiction and it had many, many beta readers.

But right at the start weird errors and inconsistencies appear >> a carriage is wrecked and overturned, and we are supposed to believe Bingley & his valet can turn it rightside up on their own; or that Lizzy starts tenderly comforting a wounded carriage driver…