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The main character is trying to draw comparisons to reasons she would feel physically sick. One being finding out her husband is cheating on her.... whilst the prior night she is necking on with another bloke!?
Is the author trying to display her as a repugnant **** or is it his ignorance of anything other than a slovenly middle aged bloke limits his story telling ability?
— Feb 26, 2017 09:53AM
Is the author trying to display her as a repugnant **** or is it his ignorance of anything other than a slovenly middle aged bloke limits his story telling ability?