Michael’s Reviews > Dragon Mage > Status Update

There are two separate female characters named Nadira and Nedira mentioned a good 20 pages away from each other. Also, Calise is barely a character; I feel nothing for the romance

“…every stare following his progress with looks of stunned shock,” (p. 633). Bro….”stunned shock”????? Stunned. Shock. Equivalent of saying ‘round orb”….the redundancy is redundant

All new information isn’t slowly revealed to us, nor naturally introduced. Rather, its exposition dump after exposition dump

We witness no development once again. Any change is skipped over via a time jump in which we are simply told what has happened. Relationships dry as hell. New characters are introduced but they’re literally just NPCs there re-emphasize how much Aram feels awkward and unlovable rather than be meaningful relationships

So masking is now being presented as a sign of strength and endurance. Wtf. That shit just makes your mental health worse bro. And they aren’t even easing Aram into SHIT 😭

The fuck you mean Aram was tortured and starved for four years straight and it didn’t break him? Also, why are they making this malnourishment, torture victim walk miles for some clothes a shoes right after he stands for the first time?