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it happened again! the horror!

hmmmmm

pro tip: make sure your metaphors can't be read as literal

The last bit's been interesting. At the rate I'm going though, I guess I better hurry if I'm gonna finish it before it's due back.

ok, at least something's happening now

ok, i like the priest better, but after one short chapter of him, it looks like we're back to the awful beatriz for nearly 100 pages before we get the priest again. :(

not really feeling this. the writing, which is what I wanted to try this author for, is fine, but I don't like the fmc at all. sure, her backstory explains why she is the way she is, i guess, but I don't like her. different pov in the next chapter, so I'll keep at it for a while, see if it improves

So far I am on team evil house. Definitely not on the editor's side after seeing "an hacienda". Perhaps I'm meant to read on in fear of seeing it repeated?