Jay Daze’s Reviews > Angel Down > Status Update
Jay Daze
is 20% done
and in the shit
and in fragments of sentences
and in one complete sentence
and with a bunch of shirkers
and a black man who is just getting the shitty job
and
and
and
and
and so on..
and so yeah, I'm actually enjoying it so far and the ands are not bugging me in fact they are actually disappearing
and the shrieking is just there man...
— Feb 24, 2026 12:01PM
and in fragments of sentences
and in one complete sentence
and with a bunch of shirkers
and a black man who is just getting the shitty job
and
and
and
and
and so on..
and so yeah, I'm actually enjoying it so far and the ands are not bugging me in fact they are actually disappearing
and the shrieking is just there man...
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Jay Daze
is 87% done
XLII - gotta have that one chapter of a sentence run on in the hallucinatory evocation of the war machine planet of death I suppose. No line breaks or breaths. Exhilarating or punishing? Brotastic? not sure.
— Feb 28, 2026 10:40AM

