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Jay Daze
Jay Daze is 20% done
and in the shit

and in fragments of sentences

and in one complete sentence

and with a bunch of shirkers

and a black man who is just getting the shitty job

and

and

and

and

and so on..

and so yeah, I'm actually enjoying it so far and the ands are not bugging me in fact they are actually disappearing

and the shrieking is just there man...
Feb 24, 2026 12:01PM
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Jay Daze
Jay Daze is 87% done
XLII - gotta have that one chapter of a sentence run on in the hallucinatory evocation of the war machine planet of death I suppose. No line breaks or breaths. Exhilarating or punishing? Brotastic? not sure.
Feb 28, 2026 10:40AM
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Jay Daze
Jay Daze is 58% done
And and and and and and another thing... and--
Feb 27, 2026 12:24AM
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