Roo’s Reviews > Trial of the Cursed Eggs > Status Update

This reads like a messy first draft. The timeline is all over the place, limited to non existent descriptions of characters and locations.

So much seems to happen off page that’s then hinted at, but then no time has passed according to the subheadings.

The premise and idea is really strong, I don’t understand how an established author published this unless it was a case of the wrong file being uploaded.