Status Updates From Trial of the Cursed Eggs (D...

After reading other trial assessments like in Featherstone Academy, and many many more, that was very weak and under whelming. If the writing was a little more detailed and in Minas head, the tension and level of difficulty could have felt more dangerous.

I was expecting so much more, then what we got, out of the gauntlet.

This reads like a messy first draft. The timeline is all over the place, limited to non existent descriptions of characters and locations.

So much seems to happen off page that’s then hinted at, but then no time has passed according to the subheadings.

The premise and idea is really strong, I don’t understand how an established author published this unless it was a case of the wrong file being uploaded.

She chose the red egg…