Sophia Barsuhn’s Reviews > Fire Star > Status Update

Way to ruin a genuinely awesome moment with horrible writing.

This is actually pretty well done. I love it when this author shows his true potential.

Oh boy. I really hate how this author writes women.

This is the first romantic moment in three books that actually feels real. I like this a lot.

Chris. My dear, darling Chris D’Lacey, author of misplaced confidence. Stop using “went” in place of “said”. Just stop doing it.

The ideas are so cool! Quantum physics and alternate realities and stuff. I just wish the writing were better.

Hey, wow. That was a pretty decent bit of writing. Sadly, as the author’s confidence grows book by book, the worse his writing gets. But that one paragraph was pretty good.