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Way to ruin a genuinely awesome moment with horrible writing.

This is actually pretty well done. I love it when this author shows his true potential.

Oh boy. I really hate how this author writes women.

This is the first romantic moment in three books that actually feels real. I like this a lot.

Chris. My dear, darling Chris D’Lacey, author of misplaced confidence. Stop using “went” in place of “said”. Just stop doing it.

The ideas are so cool! Quantum physics and alternate realities and stuff. I just wish the writing were better.

Hey, wow. That was a pretty decent bit of writing. Sadly, as the author’s confidence grows book by book, the worse his writing gets. But that one paragraph was pretty good.

You’re really trying my patience, David.