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did she seriously just trauma dump to Draco 😭😭 i can’t fucking take this seriously

someone give this chick an x-ray of her chest bc if i have to read another paragraph of breathing being painful with the personification of air im gonna lose it :3

“It was a breeding program being passed off as an economic solution.” WELL THERES RHE HANDMAIDS TALE PLAGIARISM LMFAO

“”Creative.” Ferron’s voice was colder than the wind. Fingers gripped her arm, and heat surged through her, her heart suddenly racing, hot blood pulsing through her body.” is this not the set up of a fantasy romance? be so fucking for real.

“Perhaps that ouroboros dragon was not merely a pretentious decoration but something the Ferrons prided themselves on. An omen of a destructive, insatiable hunger which left nothing but ruin in its wake.” thank you Sen i’d be lost on the symbolism without you

“His hair had been dark, now it was colourless. While the pallor of his skin didn’t come from age, he looked as if he’d been bleached in moonlight. There were no veins visible at all, as if his blood were quicksilver.”
ur telling me this is her rapist

this is suffering from over complication. i think Sen went crazy trying to find replacements for HP aspects and in doing so she made an incredibly complex magic system. not in a good way. i’m a HP virgin, so i don’t have any context for this either which is not helping the readability.

a lot of slicing through metaphorically

how many damn times will “her vision turn read”

okay 3 paragraph info dump 😍 truly beautiful stuff here guys