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The writing of this book is painfully awkward and repetitive. When two female characters are introduce one is described as "neither pretty nor beautiful" while the other is first "stunning" and then suddenly "not beautiful, hardly even pretty." I don't know how this woman has published books.
— Feb 02, 2012 08:04AM
Ryan
is on page 86 of 253
At this point it is seeming like this book started out as fanfic and somehow got published. Clumsy writing, bizarre romantic interludes and cringe-worthy dialogue. I will, however, soldier on.
— Feb 01, 2012 12:58PM

