Josh’s Reviews > The Hymn to Dionysus > Status Update

This author desperately needs to work on her storytelling talents. She's good all these little vignettes of cool different things, but jesus, they're also disconnected and confused.

So the author is doing a great job of writing some wonderful scenes. Better intriguing and funny, gripping and make me want to turn the pa. But I'm sitting here wondering if I missed some key plot points, or if it really is, yeah, it's a vague why? All this is happening to the main character. What's his motivation?And also, why are all these divine events happening around him with royalty and gods? Because right now