Ray J.’s Reviews > The Naturals > Status Update

Not sure what exact page but it’s getting better. More interesting and less annoying. Had to stop reading because I’m going to a Pierce The Veil concert rn.

Wowwww what a twisssttt. Not. I don’t understand the sudden conflict between Dean and Cassie. Why was he being a little bitch and why was she all sad and soft and ‘just talk to me’. It seemed too random for the conflict, the twist was fine but the conflict was stupid. It’s just to make up more space in the book, and to ‘add’ to the story. I seriously could care less for the love triangle. Its bad.

That kiss was lame asf and NOT needed at all

The family is lowkey a little unrealistic and there’s been some cringe stuff that just absolutely stands out. I’m enjoying the YOU thing, feels the most mature thing for a book about serial killers. Pushing through the very young adult writing. For someone who’s so alone and reads people so much you’d think she’d be slightly more mature or something.

Almost gonna DNF because she said “figure what the Hello Kitty is going on” or something. Set the book down just so I could type this