Michelle, the Bookshelf Stalker’s Reviews > Partials > Status Update

Lots and lots going on. Exactly where did they get all the explosives? I know if I went on a salvage run, I'm not likely going to find the amount of material necessary to create explosives especially over 11 years. Don't explosive material age over time? Just thinking too much, don't mind the old brain cells churning, they usually are churning wrong.

maggots on dog but indications that dog had been there a long time "old blood". The forensic entomologists at my work would have a field day with that one.

Like the story but oh the questions I have...(Sorry Wendy, can't help myself)

Oh yes, I have questions as well... Is the "Isolation War" the same as the "Partials War"? Also, how old is Jayden? And no, I can't just enjoy a book without asking a million questions.

"Kira leaned forward desperately. 'Just calm down,' she said firmly. 'He doesn't even know what your're talking about.''Don't do anything stupid, Kira." That would be fine if it wasn't Kira talking, I think the author meant to say "Don't do anything stupid, Jayden". Hopefully all these little problems will be fixed before the book is released.

So is it a camel or a donkey? 10%- "..she found herself nose to nose with a camel", 11%- "kira watched the man as he sorted out the blankets, squeezing between the dusty couches to arrange sleeping space for ten people and a donkey." So donkey or camel? Later it is a camel again but who knows, it might go back to a donkey.

oh I like you Mr. Wells. Good stuff right from the beginning. Loved the first chapter.