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EroticaAfterDark (Lilith)
is 9% done
Again L.M. Mountford strikes with an opulent narrative. Although his writing it beautiful, there are too many details, too many words to actually enjoy what I read. It's rather straining and boring, not allowing to create the sizzle an erotica book needs. it's like getting served a whole 5-layer- and having to eat it. The first piece is delicious but after that you just want to be finished....
— Aug 21, 2016 03:06AM
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