Trina Talma’s Reviews > Summoned > Status Update
Trina Talma
is 23% done
Enjoying the story, but the editing could definitely be improved. I mean I can forgive continuity errors that happen over the space of several chapters, but you can't expect me to believe two characters have to remove their clothes twice during the same sex scene.
— Aug 18, 2016 09:02PM
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Trina Talma
is 87% done
Usually by this point in a book like this I can pretty much predict how it's going to end. Not with this book. I hope that's a good thing and the ending will be surprising and satisfying, rather than so implausible that I want to throw my Kindle across the room.
— Aug 29, 2016 08:41PM
Trina Talma
is 34% done
"On-suite bathroom"? Really? Don't use a foreign phrase if you can't be arsed to look up the spelling.
— Aug 20, 2016 08:59PM
