Kirinna’s Reviews > The Serpent and the Wolf > Status Update

- ngl I dread continuing this, but maybe it picks up in the latter half?

- Vase talks about babies a lot. "She thought how she'll never have babies" (huh?? why? She isn't that old and if he divorces her she can marry whoever she wants) then later again about how powerful the babies are going to be, etc.
It doesn't even make sense because they are not supposed to be in love yet (obvs to the reader he fell the second he met her)
- we haven't really seen the magic yet? What CAN it do?

- So far it doesn't annoy me but I honestly feel a little bored/underwhelmed. It's not offensively dumb, doesn't have an (annoying) "snarky" FMC and there's a hint of something more interesting beneath the tropes, but it just isn't interested in going there
- Cover is gongeous
- Was this by any chance a star wars fanfic once? The coven has a jedi vibe
- Childhood friends < Hottie daughter of dictator => our hero