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Joshua Mousey
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Part one did well to establish characters and lore, but good lord was it slow. Hopefully things will pick up in part two.
— Mar 31, 2025 01:01PM
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Joshua Mousey
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Can’t help but wonder why the eagles didn’t fly away with Creggan during the escape when they had the chance. Now he has to backtrack for them and possibly get trapped again, unless Wolski helps.
— Apr 03, 2025 12:04PM
Joshua Mousey
is on page 124 of 192
Hope Creggan shows those Rannoch eagles what he’s made of for real. Maybe the spirit of Callanish be with him.
— Apr 02, 2025 02:14PM
Joshua Mousey
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Wish we got to see some of Creggan’s training, but we’re finally getting somewhere with escaping the zoo and exploring the world. Getting a sense of spiritual power and knowledge residing in one being passing into another can give them strength to take on the unfamiliar, scary world, despite not remembering who they are or where they came from.
— Mar 31, 2025 10:25PM
Joshua Mousey
is on page 78 of 192
Not sure if it’s because of the copy I have, but it’s somewhat hard to read this with the lack of punctuation in the prose. Run on sentences are abundant, and some passages are too verbose. A few words could’ve been cut off here and there.
— Mar 30, 2025 03:02PM

