Part 1 read!
There were a few uncomfy lines with the hot girl, and I'm a little annoyed that I don't know what David looks like and that words like "softly" keeps being repeated.
I also am just kinda waiting for David to get hurt and Megan/the others to be worried about him and actually care, but that could just be a me thing.
David's terrible at metaphors though and talks a lot, so you could say I like him.
— Jun 18, 2023 08:25PM
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