Admitting defeat and abandoning this.
There is so much superfluous information that has no relevancy to the MCs or story. There are so many pointless anecdotes that ramble on, like that relative with boring stories you always avoid.
140 pages in, the MCs are nowhere near getting together or realising it's the other they're talking to! 140 pages is a third of the way through and nothing has happened. Come on now!!
— Aug 31, 2024 07:50AM
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