Not too bad but I don’t understand why it’s written in first person. The narrator, who is the daughter, knows s lot about her father’s “extra-curricular activities”, which is weird. Also, the rivalry between the 2 brothers is odd to me. I would be thrilled and relieved if my brother or sister showed up, from out of town, to help plan an event for our father! Very interesting family dynamics.
— Oct 05, 2023 09:56AM
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