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I liked the way they are telling us the characters' strengths and weakness, and I am looking forward for how this is going to build the trama, but I am afraid of the unorthodox approach contrary to "show, don't tell".
Also, I wonder if Oliver is going to slowly substitute James as the more talented, as he seems to immerse himself more on the characters, and only lack confidence.

The amateur writing can't stop the allure of this interesting story. Yet, the conversations don't feel natural.