End of story 6, I don’t know :/ this one was all over the place and clearly was trying to tell a novel’s worth of a story in 10 pages. Too much, not enough explanation, worldbuilding was flimsy, and the dialogue did not match at all. It felt very modern, as did some of the terminology used, but then other terminology and worldbuilding indicated it was less modern so… idk. 2 Stars ✨
— Jun 13, 2024 01:52PM
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