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Enjoyable and plot-rich so far.

Plot is melding together better now. Noelle is playing a bigger and more robust role in the story, finally.

Plot is mending together slightly, but still not much written about the dog, Noelle. Storyline mainly concerns a married couple's divorce. Very little sense or substance.

A more defined plot that finally focuses on Jamie and Sherry. Many obstacles block their path to freedom, but they struggle and fight on.

Too many characters being developed. Totally confusing. And not much about Noelle! Disappointing.

The plot is still developing and confusing at this point.

So far, much better editing, but now the plot is dragging. Story is more concentrated on Jamie and Sherry, now 2 years into their kidnapping.

Ronan and Jamie are back together, and are meeting Ronan's business partner at a BDSM club.

Editing errors are rising. Plot is starting to thicken with some twists that are more evenly introduced. It has been over a year since Jamie was kidnapped, but his parents are still searching for him in Central America.

Much improved editing (though far from perfect), storyline and dialogue. Vastly better than book #1.

Fairly basic story of Daddy/twink building a relationship with the usual difficulties. Many editing errors. UGH!

Too many subplots and unnecessary characters.

Daddy/Dom finds the perfect little/sub?

Adam is finally released from the hospital, but can he keep his promise to stop smoking? And what will he do now to fill the time he has?