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Issues: The book is written from a 3rd person point of view, but this changes when we go into the history portions. But, on 622 "Can this really be America?" on the way to cemetery. What? Is Rowan's ? So much redundancy. Too long. pages just for the sake of pages. Redundant. How many times do we have to hear the cemetery, or the house, or each of these women described. this could have been a solid 300-400 page book.

Can this really be America? Never sure what perspective she is writing from. So much redundancy. Too long. pages just for the sake of pages. Redundant. How many times do we have to hear the cemetery, or the house, or each of these women described. this could have been a solid 300-400 page book.