Plot meandered at times, and character choices were frustrating but true to their ages. Overall, it felt lived in, and served the purpose of being Book 2 in a 5 part series in that it built upon the first, and set up the rest. Editing of this seemed a bit rushed, as I caught a couple typos. Hoping Book 3 keeps the momentum!
— Nov 24, 2023 12:54PM
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