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I like this book so far but if I DNF it’s because I keep leaving notes in the margin about clunky paragraph level writing.

Some unclear antecedents, double negatives, out of order clauses and repetitive sentence structures pull me out far too often.

I’m excited to keep engaging with this form. This super drably titled book is realllly fascinating in the way it breaks down visual story telling and sequential pictures so far