Ruckersville did not work for me. Decent story, but writing felt clunky and the name construct felt forced initially, and totally contrived by the end. Gizzi's poem also fell short. The repeat line "when the, when my, etc", like in Mackie "now this is..." i find boring. though i like the strange continuity it brings to the issue.
— Nov 17, 2018 02:46PM
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