She gets off topic from the plot a lot, if there even is a plot so far. The exposition doesn’t seem to be setting much up other than the fact that Mira gets annoyed easily and her wife (I think), Leah has some sort of issue. However, that’s already been established. I believe a better writer would either provide the same information in far fewer pages, or would create tangents that are interesting, like Vonnegut.
— Jan 22, 2025 03:38PM
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