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It’s really cute, good writing. I’m just nervous for when she gets caught :/

This is so cringey

This bitch is too horny

Son of a bitch

Ok they’re cute and happy I don’t want the third act break up

He’s gonna rebuild the dock at Buzzard’s Neck isn’t he

You know what trope I love?? Grumpy MMC’s dog loves FMC

I am so tired of Morana. I would take the dad’s POV at this point.

I’m bored.

This girls whole personality is she’s a computer genius but is written to be an actual idiot. Also I’m going to go out on a limb and guess her father had something to do with the kidnapped girls? And I’d beg Tristian’s sister was one of them.

I can count the words they’ve exchanged on two hands

Ok I get that this is self published but did NO ONE proof read it????

WE GET IT HIS EYES ARE BLUE

It’s just “I love him but I ruined everything” or “I love her but I can’t be with her because my people hate her” over and over again. I just want Lara, if not both of them, to die.

She was literally dying from blood loss. She LITERALLY passed out while getting stitches. And this author thinks “yes this is a good time for some smut”??? I don’t want either of these characters to be happy.

It’s just eh

“Eagles. Dozens of them. Circling the building…Somewhere on the premises was a corpse – she looked up at the birds, at their number – more than one corpse”
Does this author mean vultures????